Friday 28 July 2017
Plant writing
On Wednesday we read a poem about a bird dying and our teacher said to write one like it about
a plant and we had 20 minutes to do it I was nearly done but we had to go on the mat and some people but I was to scared so I did not publish and when I got home I did a bit more but I finished it at school.Hope you like it and enjoyed reading it.
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Hi George
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you used the right words and the way we know its a plant as the readers.You can work on more descriptive words.
Keep it up.
Bye!.
Talofa Lava George, My name is Richard I go to Waikowhai Primary School I am in room Hauraki/Te Waka Ako. I really liked how you put the information of what you were writing about. This reminds me of when I did my own poem about camp it was really fun. Next time I think you could tell us a bit more why you wrote the poem
ReplyDelete. http://wpsrichardm.blogspot.co.nz/